This my speech introduction. This is what i believe in. Many people are afraid to do anything because they are afraid, but i want to tell them, there is nothing to be afraid about.
You have a couple spelling errors and I suggest you use commas, periods and exclamation marks for the part where you are having a conversation. Also use quotations so you will know when to talk like you're having a conversation with someone, and stop using the word fun, expand on your vocabulary. Overall this is a very creative topic and your speech is going well so far.
You have a couple spelling errors and I suggest you use commas, periods and exclamation marks for the part where you are having a conversation. Also use quotations so you will know when to talk like you're having a conversation with someone, and stop using the word fun, expand on your vocabulary. Overall this is a very creative topic and your speech is going well so far.
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